【简介】感谢网友“秋月白”参与投稿，下面小编给大家整理的雅思写作注意事项（共7篇），希望大家喜欢!
篇1：雅思写作注意事项
冲刺高分，考生们不得不看的5大雅思写作注意事项了解一下
雅思写作注意事项一：喜欢用高级词汇而放弃短语使用
很多考生都会觉得用一个生僻高级的词汇，会让考官眼前一亮和证明自己词汇量丰富。其实这样的想法是错误的，考生在没有把握下，避免生硬的进行同义互换，因为会导致句子结构僵硬，让考官觉得突兀和不恰当。因此，如果使用更多的短语去代替词汇，能够让考官不仅看到语法运用熟悉得体，而且还能表现你词汇词组的综合运用能力，有些时候还能让考生的简单句变得更加精巧。顺道说一句，多用短语还能增加字数，对于有些考生遇到无话可说的情况是有很大帮助的。我们看下面例子：
I cannot bear it.
用短语替换：I cannot put up with it. I want it.
用短语替换：I am looking forward to it.
雅思写作注意事项二：喜欢积累虚词，内容空洞
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Write about the following topic:
In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peoples where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who should be responsible for our old people?
Model Answer:
Many old people in Britain, after a lifetime of hard work and the toil of bringing up children, are put into homes for the elderly by their families. There, they are looked after by professional nurses, and this is sometimes at the expense of the government. However, this situation has raised controversy about whether we extend to our elders the care and respect they deserve.
The critics of this system say that it is the duty of the family to look after its senior members in the years when they are no longer able to work. They point out that in retirement homes old people tend to feel useless and unwanted by their family members, who seldom come to see them. In addition, there is evidence that younger people benefit from the experience and wisdom of older people who live with them on a daily basis.
On the other had, those who support the system say that retired parents can be a burden to young families. Not only is it expensive to support old people who have little or no income, but the fact that old people are often ill and need a great deal of looking after can be too much for their busy children.
In my opinion, neither side is completely right. Old people in good health and with enough finances to support themselves can be a great help to their children. For instance, they can look after their grandchildren while children are out at work. On the other had, sick and penniless old people are better off being looked after in retirement homes at government expense.
